Minggu, 15 November 2009

Topic : accident
controlling idea : the reason
Topic sentence : many accidents occur along the streets of Jakarta because many reason

Outline supporting ideas :
* cause of accident that we often encounter is due to negligence of road users.
* the negligent pedestrians in crossing.
* highway facilities such as roads damaged or destroyed hollow.
* accidents among users of motorcycles and cars.


construct into paragrafh!

many accidents occur along the streets of Jakarta because many reason.first, cause of accident that we often encounter is due to negligence of road users. for example, the negligent pedestrians in crossing. not because these factors have an accident, it could also be caused because highway facilities such as roads damaged or destroyed hollow. or it could be because of accidents among users of motorcycles and cars.

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